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Eggbedhead by MorsAngelos Eggbedhead by MorsAngelos
Apparently she wears a bra when she sleeps.

I've uploaded one-fourth of the original size because this is what it looks like zoomed in.
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:iconcharelzzz:
To begin with, I'm generally not a big anthropony fan, but I like this concept a lot. It's just a little bit sexy, which I greatly prefer to some of the less subtle displays. She has a far away look about her, and the pensive pose enhances her intellectual appeal. Her eyes are luminous and liquid and the eyelashes moist. I love that little mole on her shoulder; it makes her much more genuine. The interaction between her body and the negligee (or bra or whatever) is very convincing and gives the impression of depth, texture and the breathing motion. Her hair has a feathery quality to it, which is the result of broader strokes and a fairly low opacity, giving it depth and an interesting texture. And of course I absolutely adore her nose. I want to boop it. She looks very soft and warm.

There are two negatives which take away from the otherwise superb technique, in my opinion. That hand seems a bit off. The back of the hand is too long and has looks off line from the rest of the arm, almost like you did the fingers first and then the arm up to the wrist and the join between the two is awkward. The fingers themselves are quite good. I assume that rose color is from her sleeping on it. I don't think I could draw a good hand if someone had a gun to my head, so please don't take this too hard; I'm sure you know that hands are the hardest parts of the body to represent.

The other thing is that the hair on the right side of her head seems to have had less effort put into it. The strokes appear rushed and bidirectional, almost a scribble, especially at the very top. I know that is the tousled part, but it seems you should have put more effort into blending that distinctive feature in with the rest of the piece. The low opacity strokes probably shouldn't be directly against the background. If you'd gotten the hand shape right and made the hair on that part of the head with the same attention to detail you put into the rest of the piece, you'd have gotten 5 stars from me on technique. Very, very good work!
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MyLittleSuki Featured By Owner May 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Her face reminds me of Tara Strong ... somehow Twilight (Nodding) Plz 
Nice work!
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You may just be predisposed to seeing Tara Strong's face in random deviant art posts. You should get that checked out. Could be terminal.
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EcliptorCalrissian Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
She's cute with bedhead. It's like the Two-Face version of hair; only the side she slept on got nuked! Love her expression, too. What must she be seeing, especially first thing in the morning in her own home? Spike, it's not nice to traumatize your poor mommy.
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Minty-Illusion Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute!
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EquestriaGurl77 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
This just makes me like twilight.
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't see why you didn't before. :D
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EquestriaGurl77 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
XD she just didn't have anything special I liked about her, like most main characters on shows. But I have to admit sometime she's cute.
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Naleasti Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student
I don't know why, but your drawing was just so catchy :D The hand is just too long, but otherwise I really like the drawing :D  keep it up!
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dashiegotskittles Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death.
Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if u copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. u will either get kissed or asked out, if u break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. in 53 mins someone will say i love you or im sorry
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BrookeDinkely13 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
Spam...dude..please stahp
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Alorinel Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
ew gross
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Baia16 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist
SPAM
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weasselK Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
Awesome skin work and eyes looks great!
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Botboy41 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
Dawwwwwwww, She's So Cute with her Scruffy Hair
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AskBerri Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Professional
Sooo...i wear a bra too...
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Westy543 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist
I really like the way her hair looks. Great =)
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LeannFigs1234 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very beautiful! ^w^
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MissFlight Featured By Owner May 22, 2012
That bedhead. :o
Honestly, my favorite thing about this whole picture is her eyes. Simply stunning! :)
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BX3 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist
Wow... this is... this is... wow...!
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Spit it out, man!

thanks
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Hitoshura738 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
Really cute indeed :3
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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BlackMorass Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Probably the best human rendition of Twilight I've seen yet. Excellent work!
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I dunno about "best", but I like how she turned out.
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BlackMorass Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
Of all the human Twilight renditions I've seen though, I certainly like this one the most! I'd say it turned out great!
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CAPSLOCK44 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Do more, oh god please do more. At least do Rarity
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm thinking of doing some more. I can't think of anything for rarity other than curlers and a facemask, though.

Uh, time to look at Sisterhooves for inspiration, I guess. Although, she seems more like a morning person. Maybe it'll just be a bad morning.
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CAPSLOCK44 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
I just want to see Rarity in all her glory, drawn in this absolutely perfect style :D
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:iconmorsangelos:
MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd like to be able to live up to your expectations then.

Uh, when I get around to painting her.
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Fangscream Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, the impact of this is just stunning. But once that dies off, you kinda get a chance to see the mistakes. Just as Charel pointed out, that hand of hers looks really... strange. The top is concave and the knuckles seem to jut out. Still, I'm loving your human rendition of her. It seems to fit her personality rather well, although, even for a bedhead, her hair seems just a little too... poofy. I mean, it doesn't just seem a little messy, it seems as though the hair behind her head has DEPTH, so that's a little confusing. A way to fix this might be to make her hair shading more crisp and definitive.

Either way, this is quite well done and a lot more appealing than most human twilights. ^^
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not sure what the impact of the work is except for the visual style...? Maybe the hair? I mean, she's not doing anything, really. I guess? I dunno. Intent doesn't matter, I suppose.

And, uh, yeah. I not good at draw hair. It's what I'm struggling with most with what I'm working on right now.
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Fangscream Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well to be honest, this artwork really just popped out at me because my course of thoughts went as following:
1) Oh hey, this is nice. I like her eyes and upper body...
oh and her HAIR OH MY--Twilight Sparkle!
2) Awesome, another great stunning work of art by a fan of the show. *metaphorical tears of joy*
*reads half of the critique by charelzzz*
3) Oh that's right, her hand does look a little wonky... and stuff. Oh and I guess the hair... mmm D: oh no.

BUT STILL, that's okay. You're doing fine, the thing that matters is that you -notice- that you could use work in that area and -plan- on working on it. Don't be so hard on yourself! We all make mistakes in art before we mold our skills into what we really want them to be (although the way we perceive art is constantly changing, so it's hard to imagine what we want to do with art sometimes).

But yeah, don't worry about these little mistakes. You'll work on fixing them in later work, right? So--not to seem insensitive or insincere here--don't be so pessimistic!

Best of luck with your future art. Watched.
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, thanks. Hopefully, I'll show some improvement--if not next time, some other time in the future.

(And, I probably won't go back to fix anything in this picture specifically (for historical recording purposes, you understand), though I hope to avoid making too many of the same errors if I can help it.)
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Fangscream Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know that you'll show improvement sometime soon, as long as you remain persistent.

I wouldn't fix the errors if I were you, either. It's not fun to work on stuff that you messed up on, and most of the time it's more fun (and a lot less painstaking) to start on a whole new canvas. But yeah, the whole "recording your progress" is also important.

I patiently wait for more art.
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D-M-8-1 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful! She looks great :)
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dormantfire Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
yes. perfect. :)
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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cat-gray-and-me78 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Adorable.
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You misspelled adorkable.
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cat-gray-and-me78 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Touche... :)
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gesundheit.
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ShagunLagoon Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is gorgeous!
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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newvagabond Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Arrgh, seriously so beautifully painted.
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, thanks!
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TheLivingTombstone Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Very very well done! This is the best Human Twilight I've seen by far! you did fucking awesome!!!
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for that. It's like capture lightning though. I can't seem to do anything similar anymore.
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nagashizuri Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
This is pretty fucking great, If you'll pardon my French. It's an interesting mix of almost cartoonish features for her face, combined with a very realistic look for the body. The little mole and imperfections make her seem much more realistic too.

Her expression is adorable, and ditto that little button nose and the lips and eyes. Actually I love pretty much everything about the face. I will say that it seems almost a bit too shiny, with the little purple and white flecks on her cheek that make it look like her skin is reflecting light.

My only other criticism would be the wrist, it seems somehow disconnected, or out of joint with her arm, and it looks almost broken.

Other than that? Benissimo.
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MorsAngelos Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!

Yeah, I'm not sure what I was doing with the skin. I guess maybe I was hinting at Twilight's body color? I dunno, but you're right in that it is a reflection of light, so yeah, her skin looks a little shinier than it should be.

And I've heard about the broken wrist, yeah. Whoops, looks like you won't be able to write checklists without Spike for a while, Twi.
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nagashizuri Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Just keep at it, in any case, you're about a thousand times better at art than I am.
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